Your paragraphs are missing. E-mail them to me for partial credit.
Anonymous said
at 12:50 pm on Oct 1, 2008
Kalen, my brother. I give your paper a 3 or 4. See, your paper went against everything I said in my paper.(haha)
I liked the part about the smell of the bathroom being way to unbearable. You need some more detail behind your reasoning. Then it would be a great paper.
keep it real.
Anonymous said
at 1:01 pm on Oct 1, 2008
Very good paper. I'd give it a solid 4. I liked it
Anonymous said
at 1:01 pm on Oct 1, 2008
OMG! LOVE THE PAPER!!! i give it a 4
Anonymous said
at 1:09 pm on Oct 1, 2008
very nice persuasive paper ill give u a 5.
Anonymous said
at 12:24 pm on Oct 6, 2008
Dude your picture is pretty scaryyy!
:D
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Comments (13)
Anonymous said
at 12:45 pm on Sep 12, 2008
Even tho ur tour only had one push pin...it was tight!!
Anonymous said
at 12:51 pm on Sep 12, 2008
needs work
Anonymous said
at 1:03 pm on Sep 12, 2008
looks like some pretty tight places to go to
Anonymous said
at 1:03 pm on Sep 12, 2008
needs descriptions, but not bad places
Anonymous said
at 1:07 pm on Sep 12, 2008
i LOVE your tour.
toronto is amazing.
Anonymous said
at 1:09 pm on Sep 12, 2008
nice on man.
you got some neat places up in your tour of the earth.
keep it real.
Anonymous said
at 1:12 pm on Sep 12, 2008
maple leafs? really??????
tara Seale said
at 11:00 pm on Sep 13, 2008
Your paragraphs are missing. E-mail them to me for partial credit.
Anonymous said
at 12:50 pm on Oct 1, 2008
Kalen, my brother. I give your paper a 3 or 4. See, your paper went against everything I said in my paper.(haha)
I liked the part about the smell of the bathroom being way to unbearable. You need some more detail behind your reasoning. Then it would be a great paper.
keep it real.
Anonymous said
at 1:01 pm on Oct 1, 2008
Very good paper. I'd give it a solid 4. I liked it
Anonymous said
at 1:01 pm on Oct 1, 2008
OMG! LOVE THE PAPER!!! i give it a 4
Anonymous said
at 1:09 pm on Oct 1, 2008
very nice persuasive paper ill give u a 5.
Anonymous said
at 12:24 pm on Oct 6, 2008
Dude your picture is pretty scaryyy!
:D
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